i am from saint-petersburg, russia. i believe that building a large factory near my community has advantages as well as disadvantages. in the following paragraphs i will list basic benefits and losses that will be brought by a new factory.

for several reasons, i think that a new factory will not be a good addition to my neighborhood. first of all, factories often bring pollution. they are prone to contaminating the local air and water. second of all, factories make noise. another important aspect of building a new factory near by is that it will make the local traffic heavy. as a result of this, the amount of traffic congestions will increase, as well as contamination of the air. so, all these obviously will not make one's life happier and healthier in my community.

from the other side, i believe that a new factory will bring some advantages to my community. first of all, it will bring new job opportunities. many specialists will be required to work there. second of all, i think many local community facilities will have to be renovated to obtain reliable supply of water and electricity. so, some old pipes may be changed. another important benefit of this is that the local roads in order to manage the increasing traffic will be rebuilt and widened.

however, i do not think that listed above benefits are worth all these troubles including water contamination and the constant pollution of air. from my point of view all factories must be built far from the people communities because they can be really harmful for people's health.

参考翻译

我从圣彼得堡，俄罗斯。我相信在我的社区附近建一个大工厂既有利也有弊。在下面的段落中，我将列出一个新工厂带来的基本利益和损失。

由于种种原因，我认为新工厂不会成为我邻居的好邻居。首先，工厂经常带来污染雅思大作文范文及翻译雅思大作文范文及翻译。他们容易污染当地的空气和水。其次，工厂制造噪音。附近新建一个工厂的另一个重要方面是它会使当地的交通拥挤。因此，交通拥堵的数量会增加，以及空气污染。所以，在我的社区里，这些显然不会让一个人的生活更幸福更健康。

从另一方面来说，我相信新工厂会给我的社区带来一些好处。首先，它会带来新的就业机会。许多专家将被要求在那里工作

第二，我认为很多地方的社区设施必须翻新，以获得可靠的水电供应雅思大作文范文及翻译雅思(ielts)。因此，一些旧的管道可能会改变。另一个重要的好处是，当地的道路，以管理日益增加的交通将重建和扩大。

不过，我不认为上面列出的好处是值得所有这些麻烦，包括水污染和空气的不断污染。在我看来，所有的工厂必须建在远离人民的社区，因为它们可能对人们的健康有害。

雅思的作文篇2

part 1 — 基本句子结构错误(句子不完整或句子成分多余)

简单句的两个基本成分，主语和谓语是组成所有书面英文表达的基本元素，这是每一个学习英文的同学都一定熟知的常识，但是我们常常会发现，简单句置于从句或复杂句中时，句式的不完整(通常表现为主语或动词缺失)和句子成分的多余(通常表现为多个动词简单机械的连用)这类错误就成了考生文章中的家常便饭。我们通过一个例子来看一下其中的一种：

example: on the one hand, the understanding of the artswill enable us improve the quality of spiritual life, while on the other hand, theknowledge of sciences can assist us get better interpretation of naturalphenomena.

从用词来看，这位考生的用词和句式结构并没有很大的问题，但是enable与improve的连用;assist和get的连用却给这句本身应该得到较好评分的句子大大的打了折扣，而正确的表达只需要掌握enable us to improve和assist us in getting的正确用法即可。

part 2 — 单词词性理解错误

这类错误往往出现在拥有巨大单词量的考生的作文中，这类考生在考前为了追求文章的华丽感，往往会刻意背诵一些相关的壮观词汇，而如果在考试中恰巧可以用上，考生往往会欣喜若狂，迫不及待的就将其展现出来。使用一些相对学术化的词当然对文章的整体质量有所提高，但是如果使用错误而导致失分那就真正的'得不偿失了。我们同样通过一个例子来具体分析这一问题：

example: the most obvious point is that many minoritylanguages have extincted due to the prevail of the english language.

由于英文的流行，众多小语种已经灭亡了。minority language，extinct和prevail等单词都可以算是较为书面的表达，但是将身为形容词的extinct误作动词使用，而身为动词的prevail则被扭曲成名词，一句本来应该得到加分的句子就活生生的被扼杀了，而如果可以掌握词性，正确的表达就呼之欲出了the most obvious pointis that many minority languages have gone extinct due to the prevalence of theenglish language.

part 3 — 句子结构过于冗长

在教学过程中，我们常常会发现有的考生为了追求文章的华丽感和书面化，往往会将众多从句和复杂句拼装在一起，变成一个及其复杂壮丽的组装产品，如果考生的逻辑性和英文能力较强，能够保证句子的正确性，那么这么做的结果是逼迫读者一口气读完五六行的句子以至憋气过长而亡，而如果考生的英文能力再相对差一点，这样的大句子里有一定量的语法错误，那结果就真的是悲剧了!请看下例：

example: consequence, some experts argued that theuniversities should take the equal number of male and female students so thatthe women has the equal position as men feel the equal status, it will bringprofound effects on all students, as they can compete with each other andcooperate with each other, so foster a lot of skills such as interpersonalskills, communication skills, problem-solving skills and collaborative abilitythat is useful for their future development.

如果想体会窒息的感觉，大家可以尝试着一口气读完上面的句子，保证酣畅淋漓!我们再来看看句子中的错误：consequence是个名词，考生想用的应该是意为所以的consequently;the women has the equal position asmen fell the equal status一句中出现了两个动词，属于句子基本结构的问题;it will bring profound effects和前面的句子没有连接词;so foster a lot of skills一段没有主语，同样属于句子结构问题;同时句子中的众多定语从句都有指代不明的问题。因此，阅读这么一长串的表达给读者带来的绝不会是对作者的赞赏。

山脉三点就是雅思写作低分原因的全部内容，大家可以看到在雅思写作低分原因当中，都是关于英语语言运用基础的部分，而对于一些大家流行的高级词汇和语法结构并没有出现，所以大家一定要吸取教训，要在基础上多多练习。

雅思的作文篇3

1、as 句型：

(1) as引导方式状语从句句型：“按照……;正如……”

例：we do farm work as the old peasant teaches us.

as(it is)in your country, we grow wheat in the north and rice in the south. 正如(像) 你们国家一样，我们北方种植小麦，南方种植水稻。

(2) as+形容词/副词原级+(a /an)+名词+as ;

否定式：not as/so 。 as

例：he is as good a player as his sister.他和他姐姐一样是位优秀的运动员。

(3) such + n. + as to do 如此……以致于……

例：she is such a fool as to believe what he said.

(4) so + adj./adv. + as to do sth 如此……以致于……

例：he was so strong as to carry the heavy box.

(5) such + as 象……之类的…… (接名词或定语从句)

例：he wished to be such a man as lei feng was.

他希望成为一个像雷锋这样的人。

(6) the same +名词+as 和……一样的…… (接名词或定语从句)

例：he is not the same man as he used to be. 他不是从前的那样子了。

(7) as 引导非限制性定语从句

例：as is known to us, knowledge is power. 众所周知，知识就是力量。

(8)引导时间状语从句。与while意义相近

例：we get wiser as we get older. 随着我们长大，我们也变得越来越聪明。

(9) 引导原因状语从句，与because的用法相近

例：as it was getting very late, we soon turned back.

因为越来越迟了，所以我们不久就回来了。

(10) 引导让步状语从句

例：child as he is, he knows much about science.

尽管他是一个小孩，但他对科学了解得很多。

2、prefer 句型：

(1) prefer to do sth

例：i prefer to stay at home. 我宁愿呆在家里。

(2) prefer doing sth

例：i prefer playing in defence. 我喜欢打防守。

(3) prefer sb to do sth

例：would you prefer me to stay? 你愿意我留下来吗？

(4) prefer to do sth rather than do sth ……宁愿…...而不愿…".

例：i prefer to stay at home rather than go out 我宁愿呆在家里而不愿出去。

(5) prefer doing sth to doing sth

例：i prefer watching football to playing it. 我喜欢看篮球，不喜欢打篮球。

3、when 句型：

(1) be doing sth when

例：he was still smiling when the door opened and his wife came in.

他正笑着的时候门突然开了，他妻子走了进来。

(2) be about to do sth when

例：we were about to start when it began to rain. 我们刚要出发，天就开始下雨了。

(3) hardly … when…

例：hardly had i got home when it bagan to rain. 我一到家就下起雨来。

4、seem 句型：

(1) it +seems + that从句

例：it seemed that everyone was satisfied. 看来好像每个人都很满意。

(2) it seems to sb that ---

例：it seems to me that she is right. 我看她是对的，

(3) there seems to be ----

例：there seems to be a heavy rain. 看上去要有一场大雨。

(4) it seems as if ----

例：it seemed that she couldn't come to class . 看样子她不能来上课了。

5、what 引导的名词性从句

(1) what 引导主语从句

例：what surprised me is that everybody seemed to be very indifferent to her.

让我吃惊的是每个人似乎对她都很冷淡。

[indifferent adj.不关心的；冷漠的].

(2) what 引导宾语从句

例：we can learn what we do not know. 我们能学会我们不懂的东西。

(3) what 引导表语从句

例：that is what i want. 那正是我所要的。

(4) what 引导同位语从句

例：i have no idea what they are talking about. 我不知道他们正在谈论什么。

6、too句型：

(1) too...to do sth.太。以至于不能

例：she is too small to carry the heavy box. 她太小了以至于不能搬动这个重箱子

(2) too + adj + for sth

例：these shoes are much too small for me. 我穿这双鞋太小了。

(3) too + adj + a + n.

例：this is too difficult a text for me. 这篇课文对我来说太难了。

(3) can't … too +形容词无论……也不为过

例：you can't be too careful.= you can't be careful enough.

你再细心也不为过。

i can't thank you too much.= i can't thank you much enough.

我太感谢你了。

雅思的作文篇4

the 21st century has begun.

what changes do you think this new century will bring?

model answer:

man, through the ages, has undergone many changes from the time when he depicted a herd of mammoths on the walls of his cave to these days when he can create beautiful pictures and even make coffee by use of computer technologies without leaving his favorite chair. the 20th century made huge steps in developing computer technologies and reached many goals that made our life much easier. what should we expect in the 21st century?

first of all, i think that the pace of our life will speed up: we will move faster from one place to another, from one continent to another using high speed jet airplanes. second of all, i believe that we will be able to do many things that take much time now without leaving our house. computers will be everywhere including out clothes. many people will have chips and mini computers ed in their heads to hold huge amount of information and have a quick access to it.

but what will be the most amazing thing in the 21st century is the flights to the outer space and mars that will be available to all people. scientists say that mars has many things similar to the earth's. moreover, they say that with the help of modern technology people can artificially create conditions that will allow people to live there on the constant basis.

to sum up, i am sure that many amazing changes will be brought by the 21st century. furthermore, i think that with the help of the contemporary technologies people can do many things that were even difficult to imagine a century ago. so, nowadays it is rather difficult and even impossible to imagine all changes that will happen in the next decades.

people have different views about whether we are more or less dependent on others nowadays. in my view, modern life forces us to be more independent than people were in the past.

there are two main reasons why it could be argued that we are more dependent on each other now. firstly, life is more complex and difficult, especially because the cost of living has increased so dramatically. for example, young adults tend to rely on their parents for help when buying a house. property prices are higher than ever, and without help it would be impossible for many people to pay a deposit and a mortgage. secondly, people seem to be more ambitious nowadays, and they want a better quality of life for their families. this means that both parents usually need to work full-time, and they depend on support from grandparents and babysitters for child care.

however, i would agree with those who believe that people are more independent these days. in most countries, families are becoming smaller and more dispersed, which means that people cannot count on relatives as much as they used to. we also have more freedom to travel and live far away from our home towns. for example, many students choose to study abroad instead of going to their local university, and this experience makes them more independent as they learn to live alone. another factor in this growing independence is technology, which allows us to work alone and from any part of the world.

in conclusion, while there are some reasons to believe that people now depend on each other more, my own view is that we are more independent than ever.

with the development of cities, more and more new buildings are appearing in the city. some people claim that the government should ensure all the new buildings should be built in traditional styles. for me, i do not agree with this suggestion.

undoubtedly, the old buildings can reflect our traditional culture and should be protected and built. they are the houses where the ancient people lived. by appreciating these old buildings, we can have a better understanding of our ancient culture and history.

however, i do not agree that all the new buildings should be built in traditional styles. first of all, a city’s culture identity consists of the past culture and the modern culture. while past culture can be represented by the traditional buildings, modern culture should be reflected by modern buildings. if all the new buildings are built in traditional styles, the modern culture may be lost in the city. secondly, the style of the new building should be decided by a lot of factors such as location, function, and so on. for instance, it is impossible for us to build a modern shopping mall into traditional style, because there are a lot of famous brands inside. thirdly, modern buildings can accommodate more people than traditional buildings, which can meet the increasing population.

therefore, i agree that we should build some old buildings, but we should not build all the buildings into traditional styles. we should consider a lot of aspects before we make the final decision.

as a result of constant media attention, sports professionals in my country have become stars and celebrities, and those at the top are paid huge salaries. just like movie stars, they live extravagantlifestyles with huge houses and cars.

many people find their rewards unfair, especially when comparing these super salaries with those of top surgeons or research scientists, or even leading politicians who have the responsibilityof governing the country. however, sports salaries are not determined by considering the contribution to society a person makes, or the level of responsibility he or she holds. instead, they reflect the public popularity of sport in general and the level of public support that successful stars can generate. so the notion of ‘fairness’ is not the issue.

those who feel that sports stars’ salaries are justified might argue that the number of professionals with real talent are very few, and the money is a recognition of the skills and dedication a person needs to be successful. competition is constant and a player is tested every time they perform. in their relatively short career. the pressure from the media is intense and there is little privacy out of the spotlight. so all of thesefactors may justify the huge earnings.

personally, i think that the amount of money such sports stars make is more justified than the huge earnings of movie stars, but at the same time, it indicatesthat our society places more value on sport than on more essential professions and achievements.

译文

在媒体不断地推波助澜下，我国的许多职业运动员已成为了明星和名人。那些顶尖的运动员收入颇丰。像一些电影明星一样，他(她)们也是香车豪宅，生活极为奢华。

许多人觉得与那些挣高薪的顶级外科医生，从事研究的科学家或有管理国家责任的高官相比，他(她)们的回报极为不公。然而，运动员的薪水并不是由一个人对社会所做出的贡献或者其责任水平所决定。相反，它们反映的是从整体上来说体育运动在大众中的普及性以及那些成功的体育明星对促进公众对运动的支持所做出的贡献。所以，“公平”的概念并不是问题关键之所在。

那些认为体育明星拿高薪无可厚非的人争辩说那些有天赋的体育运动员实属凤毛麟角，高薪是对他（她)们娴熟技能和通往成功之路所付出努力的承认。竞争持续不断，运动员在他（她）们相对较短的运动生涯中迎接每次检验。来自于媒体的压力令人窒息，而且他（她）们必须生活在镁光灯下，没有隐私。这一切都证明了他(她）们高薪得之无愧。

在我个人看来，比起电影明星的高薪，体育明星的高薪更受之无愧。但与此同时，该现象也显得出我们的社会更关注体育而非其它一些更重要的领域和成就。

雅思的作文篇5

雅思写作考试话题：some people who have been in prison become citizens later. some people think that they are the best people to talk to school students about the danger of committing a crime. to what extent do you agree or disagree?已经成为良好市民的ex-prisioner，是最合适的人选，来教育学生关于犯罪的危害么?立场：完全反对，采用四段式(2个反对理由各为一段)。

雅思写作范文：

preventing juvenile delinquency and cultivating children's law-abiding consciousness are an indispensable part in school education. who are the best teachers in this regard is a debatable issue, but i object to inviting criminals set free from prison to educate school children about the danger of crimes.

admittedly, these former criminals' personal experience can be more vivid and interesting than teachers' standardized course books, which can successfully attract children's attention. however, at an age without the ability to distinguish right from wrong, children tend to pay more attention to the crime itself rather than the purpose of education. for instance, the story of robbing a shop can be very stimulating to children, but what serious consequences such a crime can lead to may not have as much influence as the story does on children's minds.

since criminals have become good citizens, they cannot be denied the right to help the young generation to understand and obey the law. but these former criminals are not the best people to do this. children have a tendency to imitate what they see and hear. when they see criminals are transformed into good citizens and even become respected lecturers on the stage, children may get the wrong impression that committing crimes can be forgiven. this goes against the origin i intention of letting children stay away from crimes and respect and obey the law.

contact with people who have crime records will inevitably cause parents' and teachers' concerns; therefore, perhaps the policemen who deal with criminals should play a role in educating children to realize the danger of crimes.

2018年7月28日雅思写作真题小作文 :the chart shows the percentage of boys and girls who participate in different sports activities in 2010.男女生在6项运动里参与的人数比例。

这道小作文题目毫无难度，考生们只要注意到了这是参与的人的比例，而不是人数即可。重点写到这是六种运动的流行性或者吸引力即可：popularity of six kinds of sports for boys and girls.这次考试的图形为最常见的柱图，首先要注意的动静态的区分及写作重点的不同，同时在分析分段的时候，两种项目之间要分析按照哪种项目分段比较有利于我们的细节比较，再之后用另一种项目进行总结即可。图形比较的简单，详略度上也要注意

雅思小作文参考范文

given is a bar making a comparison in the proportion of two genders who take part in the six physical activities in 2010.

from what can be seen, girls had the greatest enthusiasm for swimming with a percentage of 13%, at the same time, figures for tennis and basketball were also significant, at 8% and 7% respectively. in contrast, female teenagers showed lowest interests in cricket and netball, at an equal proportion of 2%.

on the other hand, as for the counterpart of girls, 20% and 18% (highest proportion) of boys played football and netball in 2010, which is followed by those of swimming and cricket at above 10%. however, people in this group involving in basketball and tennis accounted for the least, just below 10%.

overall, the involvement of boys, compared with that of girls, in sports is generally higher and gaps in cricket, netball and football between two sexes are most noticeable.

雅思小作文核心词汇

making a comparison genders

physical activities greatest enthusiasm for

lowest interests in counterpart

followed by involving in gaps most noticeable

2018年8月2日雅思图表小作文真题范文动态线形图

2018年8月2日雅思小作文线图the graph shows the producton of main fuels in uk between 1986 and 2000.

线图展示了英国三种主要燃料(石油，天然气，煤炭)在1986年到2000年的产量变化。注意选取主要的特征对信息进行概括，在相关的地方进行比较。在时态上注意使用过去时，动态的线图需要足以上升和下降的表达，还有极值的选取。

雅思小作文范文：

the line graph illustrates how the amount of three primary fuels generated had changed in the uk during 14 years spanning from 1986 to 2000.

from 1986 to 1995, we can see that petroleum was a dominant resource, with its production standing at 120 in 1986. then there was a significant rise in the following years and after peaking at 140 in 1991, the production dropped considerably down to the 1986 figure. a reversed trend could be seen in coal, with its generation starting from 110 and ending with roughly 90 in 1995. it is natural gas that remained the least and the most stable at around 60 over the time frame.

during the remaining five year, a particular rise could be seen in petroleum, shooting up to almost 150 in 2000 while coal underwent a dramatic fall to about 60. natural gas had gained more popularity, exceeding coal in 1996 and finally becoming the second leading resource in this country with 120 of total production.

in brief, petrol and natural gas were the leading energy while coal had lost its dominance over this period.

雅思小作文范文解析：

线型图一般考察3-6条线的变化趋势，时间多数为过去，有时候较复杂会包含过去，现在及将来预测。该题目审题不难，时间为1986至2000，时态为一般过去时或者过去完成时。地点为英国，具体内容为3种主要能源的生产。该题主要解题思路有两种：1. 按照能源划分，各自描述变化趋势，最后做对比;2. 按照时间段划分，比如1986-1995，1995-2000分开描述。数字单位不详。

雅思的作文篇6

it is inevitable that traditional cultures will be lost as technology develops. technology and traditional cultures are incompatible. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

9分范文:

some people believe that technological developments lead to the loss of traditional cultures. i partly agree with this assertion; while it may be true in the case of some societies, others seem to be unaffected by technology and the modern world.

on the one hand, the advances in technology that have driven industrialisation in developed countries have certainly contributed to the disappearance of traditional ways of life. for example, in pre-industrial britain, generations of families grew up in the same small village communities. these communities had a strong sense of identity, due to their shared customs and beliefs. however, developments in transport, communications and manufacturing led to the dispersal of families and village communities as people moved to the cities in search of work. nowadays most british villages are inhabited by commuters, many of whom do not know their closest neighbours.

on the other hand, in some parts of the world traditional cultures still thrive. there are tribes in the amazon rainforest, for example, that have been completely untouched by the technological developments of the developed world. these tribal communities continue to hunt and gather food from the forest, and traditional skills are passed on to children by parents and elders. other traditional cultures, such as farming communities in parts of africa, are embracing communications technologies. mobile phones give farmers access to information, from weather predictions to market prices, which helps them to prosper and therefore supports their culture.

in conclusion, many traditional ways of life have been lost as a result of advances in technology, but other traditional communities have survived and even flourished.

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雅思的作文篇7

考生在雅思写作考试时有两种常见写作顺序，雅思考试时应该先写小作文还是先写大作文?。一种是先写大作文，另一种是先写小作文。到底哪一种更为可取呢？

如果先写大作文的话，由于大作文在写作中得分的比重大，所以可以先攻克难关，有充分的时间来写大作文，可以避免由于花过多时间在小作文上而导致大作文写不完的情形。但如果大作文的时间花得太长了，小作文没写好的话，也是很可惜的。而且，考生在刚提笔写作的时候，通常需要一段时间来进入写作状态，这样一来，大作文的前半部分可能写得就会不如人意。

反之，如果先写小作文，虽然可能有大作文还等在后面的心理压力，但好处更多。首先，小作文比较简单，套话多，结构容易，表达法也更加固定，所以写起来比较顺利，可以增强自信心，托福英语《雅思考试时应该先写小作文还是先写大作文?》。其次，进入写作状态是需要时间的，先写小作文可以让自己的笔头越写越顺，等到20分钟后开始写大作文的时候，正好进入最佳状态，来面对大作文。

总之，我个人认为，还是先写小作文，然后再写大作文更为可取。当然，如果考生习惯了先写大作文的话，也是完全可以按照自己的步调来进行的。但无论先写大作文还是小作文，都需要分配好时间，那就是小作文20分钟左右，大作文40分钟左右。

雅思的作文篇8

雅思大作文题目一般分为两大类，即argument和report。

雅思大作文题目中的argument可以更通俗的称为debate，也就是对一个有争议的话题提出作者的看法，并且展开阐述维护作者的立场。其实我们可以更加形象的来看待这个问题，把每个题目视为一场辩论会，正方(for)和反方(against)进行辩论，而作者则为裁判(judge, referee)，在听取双方的意见后发表总结陈词，在陈词中作者需要对双方提交的证据进行分析，并做出自己的判断。

雅思大作文题目中的report的题目则是对一个非争议的现象进行分析讨论，如现在新闻上经常出现的关于全球气候变暖(global warming)进行讨论，全球气候变暖，这是个不争的事实，我们需要讨论其原因(cause),影响(effect)和解决措施(solution)

argument和report的区别

话题性质：argument为争议性的，report为非争议性的

题目需求：argument寻求看法，观点;report寻求信息

展开论述：argument需要评估对立双方的证据;report无对立的双方

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